extra writing for term 4 week 2

writing for term 4 weeks 2 I really hope you like it because I spent 32 minutes on it

If your overactive imagination runs away from you and you suddenly find yourself in the middle of a big war and you can hear gunshots in the background I'm running for my life trying to find shelter as I can hear screams from people dying then luckily I found shelter and I just sprint to make sure I don't die in a couple seconds later I hear a big boom and I'm thinking that must of come from a plane so I tried my hardest to run as I run i see water at the beach and see a medical boat so I pretend that I got really hurt so I can go on the boat and go back to home and I go back to NZ and I'm hoping they let me free and luckily I got to go back to my apartment 

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my Learn Create Share term 4 week 2

 my Learn Create Share term 4 week 2 maths,writing,reading and topic

 

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writing for term 4 week 1

my writing is about making up Park step-by-step

I hope you really like it I spent I spent a decent amount of time

 

I'm telling you step-by-step how to build a Park near the Pahurehure Inlet

first of all you're going to make this little platform web little kids can go on and you're going to make a platform that goes over it so the kids don't get wet when it rains and you're gonna have to get some poles to make sure it stays up 

secondly you're gonna put a slide so people can go down on it and make sure it's big enough so older kids can also do it put the platform bike above the the ground and make sure you built it in somewhere it can stay still not moved so it can't break and make sure there's Bark on the ground

thirdly make sure you put an a monkey bar because that's how I want my Park to be and make sure it is not too dangerous but make it above ground so if the kids want to go on it play can

Topic for term 4 week 2

it is about a playgroup I have to design to make it next to the Pahurehure inlet

do you think it would be a good playground ?

maths for term 4 week 2

 part two of my maths I really hope you liked it

do you think you can say a Maori words out loud ?

maths for term 4 week 2

 Chris is my maths at this is about I have to name the shape of the logo

do you think you know what the logos are ?

Learn Create Share term 4 week 1

 Learn Create Share it has maths writing reading

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my writing term 4 week 1

I hope you like my writing and I put heaps of time into it

Dylan

So there I was listening to the waves on my ship. I was trying to do my job and a big storm hits my ship and all I am trying to do is get money back to my home me as a you teenager trying to do a job and a big storm just comes I'm giving screams from my Crewman I smell blood from my hand as I have a sharp cut as I'm feeling it I touched the railing .

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this is my bird feeder for term 4 week 1

 I hope you like my bird feeder

do you think you can make your own bird feeder?

part two of my writing for term 4 week 1

 my riding is a belt writing a letter to the Auckland Council

I am writing a letter to Auckland Council why my idea is best to change about Pahurehure Inlet

address the school 23 Ray Small Drive 

Date Tuesday October 19th

to Auckland Council 

I think my idea is the best because we can more trees and we could put in a man-made rockwall and we can also make when the tides and where can not come back out so people can swim in the water and  like this little place where people can look at the tide come in and watch the sunset or sunrise and there should be more birds over there so we can look at all the pretty birds and make it more beautiful than it is right now

Dylan

do you think my idea is good ?

Pahurehure Inlet Improvements

 this is about Improvements for the Pahurehure Inlet

do you think you would like to see birds and Kiwis In the Pahurehure Inlet ?

my writing for term 4 week 1

I am writing about how to help the Pahurehure Inlet

first of all I think we could plant water trees because we don't have much and we could take the little scumps out of the water because so when the water come back in people can come and jump in the water and swim

secondly we can help by stop throwing our rubbish in the Pahurehure Inlet so it looks more better than it was before because there's heaps of rubbish down there and that's not good for the environment

Thirdly to make sure there is less pollution because the water is really dirty and because since the motorway is right next to the inlet it's going to make the water or pollution because of all the goss so I hope that is the good enough report for you

I really hope you like my writing 

maths for term 4 week 1

 this is my maths I really hope you like it

I really hope you like my maths

do you think you can do this